Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay on the topic of students selecting their lectures. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:
1. 越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么？ 2. 也会带来一些问题 3. 你的看法？
Free admission to museums 【范文】
There are an increasing number of museums which are open to the public for free in our daily life nowadays. However, no consensus is reached among the public on the influence it brings about on the museums and the visitors involved.
Some people hold the opinion that freen admission to museums will contribute to numerous problems ranging from the spolinig of the environment to the damage to the facilites of the museums.
It is known that some visitors will throw awys the garbage here and there, which will do great damage to the surroundings of the museusm. Worsely, it will take a lot of time and effort for the museums to fix the facilities destroyed by the little kids who come to the musem without company of their parents. However, there are different opinions on whether visitors should enjoy free admission or not. Some people maintain that visitors can acquire new knowledge and enrich their lives by visiting various museums.
As far as I am concerned, just as every coin has two sides, it is true to the above phenomenon. Therefore we are expected to take measures to educate the public to observe the rules and regulations when visiting the museums. Thus, more and more individuals will enjoy a favorable environment. Part Ⅰ Writing (30 minutes)
注意：此部分试题在答题卡1上。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Creating a Green Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1. 建设绿色校园很重要
2. 绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境…… 3. 为了建设绿色校园，我们应该……
Creating a Green Campus 范文
In recent years, extravagance and waste have become increasingly serious in some of the university campus. We can see that papers, bottles and cans are thrown away after use; food is wasted just because of its poor taste; clothes are discarded simply owing to their old fashion. As a consequence, people in mounting numbers put great emphasis on creating a green campus.
There are at least two criteria to distinguish what is green campus. On the one hand, natural resources must be conserved and made full use of, for example, we, as college students, should take the wise use of papers and second-hand textbooks into account. On the other hand, education to build up thrift habits must be promoted by relevant departments and professionals at various levels.
Accordingly, it is necessary for us to take effective steps. For one thing, university authorities should respond with the demand for more rigid conservation of our natural resources, such as water, electricity, and so on. For another, we should enhance the awareness of college students that creating a green campus is of utmost significance to both our society and ourselves. 点点英语四六级作文点评 点点英语四六级教学团队 张培 Create a green campus 1.建设绿色校园十分重要
2.绿色校园不仅指绿色环境采集者退散
3.为了建设绿色校园我们应该……
本次四级考试作文题目难度较低，体现出一种较新的命题方式，也就是校园类与社会类话题相结合的方式，同时不避讳社会热点话题，这是值得我们所关注和思考的。总之一句话，还是侧重对于考生基本功的考查和测试。下面就题材和体裁两方面进行点评。
具体来说，首先在题材上，依然是我们所熟悉的校园类话题，而且更为直接，同时兼顾社会的热点，特别关注热点二个字，这也与社会的大背景有关系，目前全社会，全世界都特别提倡可持续发展、和谐发展、刚刚闭幕的哥本哈根世界气候大会也同时关注环保减排这个主题，因此我们的作文也与政治背景有很大的关系，这也是我们所必须考虑的。我们点点英语 四六级 教学团队在临考前给出的冲刺预测作文中的句型和短语全部可以用在本次作文中，而且在临考前1周的论坛上（bbs.diandian.net）我们又进一步缩小的命题范围，并成功命中作文。从关注白色污染，到关注博物馆免费开放再到绿色校园的构建来看，命题重点悄悄的由原来侧重于校园中的学习类话题和校园中的学生的课余娱乐方面的话题向与大学生的社会生活有关的话题转移。
其次，在体裁和内容以及段落构成方面，基本上属于重要性阐述+问题分析阐释+措施的传统三段式段落结构。虽然看起来在难度上不是很大，但对于考生来说，如果事先只背过千篇一律的模板而没有亲自动手练习的话，将严重影响考生作文的分数。但在这里提醒广大考生，按照新的阅卷标准和阅卷教师的反馈的信息，模板作文的得分普遍比较低，而且现在的老师有反模板的倾向，这就要求考生在表达上具有多样性，要有闪光点，要求考生在平时备考中注重基本功的培养，摒弃模板，同时增加对各种话题的整理与把握，这样才能在写作这个项目中取得高分。具体来说，体现在主题词的替换和句型的替换上，也就是我们所说的闪光点上。本文的主题是绿色校园，有很多种表达，比如说green campus =
environmental-friendly campus = pollution-free campus 等等，都可以表示绿色校园，这就体现出考生对词汇多样性的积累，对于得分肯定有很大的好处。，另外关于“构建”的表达也有很多，比如create= build up= establish=construct 等等，注意在作文中替换使用； 其次在段落方面，第一段要求写重要性，可以写sth is of intense importance = sth is of intense significance 等等都可以，这都比sth is becoming more and more impotant 好多了。第二段写绿色校园的内涵，比如说绿色校园不但要求环境要绿色，无污染，而且还要充满着协调、人文关怀、师生关系之间、宿舍同学之间的和谐等等，可以发挥的空间很大，最后一段写构建和谐校园的措施，可以从二个角度二个层面来写，校方应该如何做，师生应该如何做，另外从思想层面和实际措施层面来写，总体来说，本次作文较为容易，得分应该不会很低，关键是看考生有无出彩的闪光点表达，这也成为未来四级作文判分的重要标准。
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